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24.08.22 Unmasking Reality on Social Media

ํ•˜ ๋Œ€ํ‘œ 2024. 10. 11. 00:51

์†Œ์…œ ๋ฏธ๋””์–ด ํ”ผ๋“œ๋ฅผ ๋ณด๋ฉด, ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ํ ์žก์„ ๋ฐ ์—†์ด ์™„๋ฒฝํ•œ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์‚ด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ณด์ธ๋‹ค.

์–ด์ˆœ : ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์†Œ์…œ ๋ฏธ๋””์–ด ํ”ผ๋“œ๋“ค์„ ๋ณผ ๋•Œ./ ๊ทธ๊ฑด ๋ณด์ธ๋‹ค / ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ์™„์ „๋ฌด๊ฒฐํ•œ ์ธ์ƒ์„ ์‚ด๊ณ  ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ.

* (ํ‰์„œ๋ฌธ)์ธ ๊ฒƒ์ฒ˜๋Ÿผ ๋ณด์ธ๋‹ค : It seems + like (ํ‰์„œ๋ฌธ)

* ์™„์ „๋ฌด๊ฒฐํ•œ : picture-perfect

When I look at social media feeds, it seems like everyone is living a picture-perfect life.


๋งˆ์น˜ ๋‚ด ์ง€์ธ ๋ชจ๋‘๊ฐ€ ํ–‰๋ณตํ•˜๊ณ  ๊ฒฝ์ œ์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ฑ๊ณตํ•œ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋‹ค. ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ณผ์—ฐ ๊ทธ๋Ÿด๊นŒ?

์–ด์ˆœ : ๊ทธ๊ฑด ๋งˆ์น˜ / ๋‚ด๊ฐ€ ์•„๋Š” ๋ชจ๋“  ์‚ฌ๋žŒ์€ ํ–‰๋ณตํ•˜๊ณ  ์žฌ์ •์ ์œผ๋กœ ์„ฑ๊ณต์ ์ด๋‹ค. / ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ๋“ค์€ ๊ทธ๋Ÿฐ๊ฐ€?

* ๋งˆ์น˜ (ํ‰์„œ๋ฌธ)์ธ ๊ฒƒ ๊ฐ™๋‹ค : It's like (ํ‰์„œ๋ฌธ)

* ์žฌ์ •์ ์œผ๋กœ : financially

It's like every person I know is happy and financially successful. But are they?


์ž์นซ ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์ž์‹ ์„ ๋‚จ๋“ค๊ณผ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ํœฉ์“ธ๋ฆฌ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ ์‰ฝ๋‹ค.

์–ด์ˆœ : ๊ทธ๊ฑด ์‰ฝ๋‹ค / ์žกํ˜€ ์žˆ๊ธฐ๊ฐ€ / ์šฐ๋ฆฌ ์ž์‹ ๋“ค์„ ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— / ๋‹ค๋ฅธ ์ด๋“ค์—๊ฒŒ.

* (~ing) ํ•˜๋Š” ๊ฒƒ์— ํœฉ์“ธ๋ฆฌ๋‹ค : get caught up + in (~ing)

* A๋ฅผ B์— ๋น„๊ตํ•˜๋‹ค/๋น„์œ ํ•˜๋‹ค : compare A + to B

It's easy to get caught up in comparing ourselves to others.


ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ๊ทธ ํ•„ํ„ฐ๋“ค๊ณผ ์กฐ์‹ฌ์Šค๋ ˆ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ๋“ค ๋’ค์— ์Šฌํ”ˆ ์ง„์‹ค์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑธ ์•Œ์•„์•ผ ํ•œ๋‹ค.

์–ด์ˆœ : ํ•˜์ง€๋งŒ ์šฐ๋ฆฐ ๋ฐ˜๋“œ์‹œ ์•Œ์•„์•ผ๋งŒ ํ•œ๋‹ค / ์Šฌํ”ˆ ์ง„์‹ค์ด ์žˆ๋‹ค๋Š” ๊ฑธ / ๊ทธ ํ•„ํ„ฐ๋“ค ๋’ค์— / ๊ทธ๋ฆฌ๊ณ  ์กฐ์‹ฌ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ ๋งŒ๋“ค์–ด์ง„ ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ๋“ค (๋’ค์—.)

* ์‚ฌ์‹ค, ์ง„์‹ค : truth

* ํ•„ํ„ฐ : filter

* ์กฐ์‹ฌ์Šค๋Ÿฝ๊ฒŒ, ์‹ ์ค‘ํžˆ : carefully

* ๊ณต๋“ค์—ฌ ๋งŒ๋“ค๋‹ค : craft

* ๊ฒŒ์‹œ๋ฌผ : post

But we must know there is a sad truth behind those filters and carefully crafted posts.


์šฐ๋ฆฌ์—๊ฒŒ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฑด ์ง„์‹ค๋œ ๋ถˆ์™„์ „ํ•จ์ด๋‹ค. ํ•„ํ„ฐ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋œ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•จ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ.

์–ด์ˆœ : ์šฐ๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ํ•„์š”ํ•œ ๊ฑด ์ง„์งœ์ธ ๋ถˆ์™„์ „ํ•จ์ด๋‹ค, / ํ•„ํ„ฐ ์ฒ˜๋ฆฌ๊ฐ€ ๋œ ์™„๋ฒฝํ•จ์ด ์•„๋‹ˆ๋ผ.

* ๋ถˆ์™„์ „ํ•จ, ๊ฒฐํ•จ : imperfection

What we need is real imperfection not filtered perfection.

 

 

์˜์–ด๋ฅผ ๋”~์ž˜ํ•˜๋ ค๋ฉด ์ฑ…์„ ๊ตฌ๋งคํ•ด์„œ ์ฆ๊ฒ๊ฒŒ~์”ฌ๋‚˜๊ฒŒ~ํ•˜์„ธ์š”~
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